The Last Breath

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Jun 12, 2006


The Last Breath

He runs towards her, carrying a knife,
"Hello darling, I'm ending your life."
She says, "Why, what have I done,
I've kept our relationship so fun!"

"Shut up liar, I'm sick of your lies,
No one will cry when I make you die.
I plan on taking this knife and killing you,
So goodbye darling, your life is through"

He stabs her in the stomach, as she screams,
"Soon this relationship will be just a dream!"
He stabs her again, over and over again,
No way for her to live, or write this down in pen.

Continues to stab, until she thinks she's died,
He takes out the knife, as he thinks of a good lie.
He walks out, yet she's not yet faced her death,
A single tear falls, as she takes her last breath.

~*Who Cares?*~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Skye

    This is an awsome poem,, u have a lot of talent..

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    Tragic. The flow was awsome. It was sad, deep, and tragic all at the same time. All I can really say is wow.

    -ifihide

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-------sad------deep-----5/5 uv got talent

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow....Amazing...Outstanding..Poem...I loved It.... One Of The Best I've Read! I loved The Emotion And The Flow Of This Poem 5/5
    Love,
    Steph*xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*XTheseTearsFallDownLikeRainX*