Comments : The Last Breath

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Wow....Amazing...Outstanding..Poem...I loved It.... One Of The Best I've Read! I loved The Emotion And The Flow Of This Poem 5/5
    Love,
    Steph*xbr0k3ndr3amzzx*XTheseTearsFallDownLikeRainX*

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-------sad------deep-----5/5 uv got talent

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    Tragic. The flow was awsome. It was sad, deep, and tragic all at the same time. All I can really say is wow.

    -ifihide

  • 18 years ago

    by Skye

    This is an awsome poem,, u have a lot of talent..