by Kaylee
I'm all for the baseball theme, as this is an original appraoch to life poems, and each thing you described kind of did make sense. But there are a few suggestions that I have and I hope you don't mind: |
by Natalie
Very nice poem. I really liked how you went through and desribed each ball, {Low ball, High ball, Etc.} It was a great poem, With a great meaning to it. The only problem I had was with this line: |
by Megann Lee
Ahh, I like how you compaired life to baseball. Least I think I am grasping that. I hope. Ohwell. I loved it very true aswell. |