Comments : Last Moments

  • 18 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    Thats beautiful! Brilliant, Brilliant!

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 18 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    I liked this, and the story was rele good (girl of many talents), i thought u might put it on here...hope ur all good!!! ummm...yea!!! bye bye

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey this one is really good dear and very diff too as its a sad and towards the farewell.. :o)
    m sure with the sort of human u r, there is a long way to reach such stage and i m sure i do deserve to get tons of more poems from u soon.

    great write indeed

    all the best and take care
    5/5