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by eternitySOlong   Jun 12, 2006


***I am in a mood to where I can't even begin to rhyme. This is the first poem that I've posted that didn't. So...if you have the time please comment. I really need HONESTY on my work right now. Thanks.***

Pages and pages
Emotions on paper
Poems and thoughts
Stapled together

Day by day
My tears hid the mistakes
Night after night
I added more pain

I've made you a present
Wrapped with a bow
Open it and see
What do you think

A tattered book
Infinite white pages
Titled neatly,
I LOVE YOU; I MISS YOU

Read it, read it
Don't judge by the cover
Page 1...blank
Page 2...blank

You see...I know you don't care
I burned my thoughts
I buried my soul
I have no blood

Pale as white paper
My body's a canvas
Ah, but the last page
Turn to it...it's not empty

Slowly you understand
As it reads...
"Why write a book,...
When the title says it all?"

***Thank You For Reading***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia

    AWW I loves it it is like amazing and rhymes don't make the poem it's the meaning behind the words that matter but this is totally awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Aww wow. I absolutely love it. it is very different from your others but still so amazing. Anything you write will turn out great. love youuu.

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Wow even though it doesn't rhyme it is still amazing. i honestly love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by jessica

    This poem is awesome. i love it i love it i love it. i love you jewelee!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Omg this is the most fuken greatest poem ever....im soo puttin it up in myspace...i loves it soo much..babes u have soo much talent u really shud send some of ur poems in some competition...cos there real good...ur like one of me fave poets here i hearts all ya poems...and btw im here for ya if ya ever need me*nods*

    loves ya
    =D

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