Wow ur a great poet u know?
you have a great choice of words which actually make sense =]

[ooo]...leah...[xxx]

I love this poem its so good. its amazing.. i like the flow of words u used. great job.. keep it up 5/5
angie

Wonderful poem, shows alot of emotion with the sadness you feel, thank you for your comment and taking the time to read some of my stuff. keep on writting and take care

I know how that feels...

Wow...great job..u are amazing at writing...good usage of ur words and so one
5/5 Oxo Laura Marie aka Sweets

I thought u said ur poems are bad man girl your mad.

This is a very good poem victoria, i liked the flow and structure, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

WOW>.. that is amazing.. that s how i feel right now..
dont stop wrting ur really good