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by Poet on the Piano
"God sent meâ?¦" Doesn't make sense, just erase that a? thingy that pops up. "God sent me an angle from the heavens above God sent me someone to love Someone to have, someone to hold." First line: "angle" should be spelled "angel" they are two different things. "God sent me a gift from the sky God sent me some special to have in my life Someone to talk too, someone to kiss." Great wording, this is so heartfelt and touching. "God sent me someone belief God sent me someone who had faith in me Someone to take care of me, someone with strength." First line: It doesn't make sense, the last part, when I read it. Should it be "God sent me someone to believe in me"? "When God said he was going to send me Someone beautiful, smart, perfect, and new I thank God he sent me you." Great ending, this is such a pleasure to read, its so beautiful. 4/5 from me, take care...