Comments : God Sent

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "God sent meâ?¦"

    Doesn't make sense, just erase that a? thingy that pops up.

    "God sent me an angle from the heavens above
    God sent me someone to love
    Someone to have, someone to hold."

    First line: "angle" should be spelled "angel" they are two different things.

    "God sent me a gift from the sky
    God sent me some special to have in my life
    Someone to talk too, someone to kiss."

    Great wording, this is so heartfelt and touching.

    "God sent me someone belief
    God sent me someone who had faith in me
    Someone to take care of me, someone with strength."

    First line: It doesn't make sense, the last part, when I read it. Should it be "God sent me someone to believe in me"?

    "When God said he was going to send me
    Someone beautiful, smart, perfect, and new
    I thank God he sent me you."

    Great ending, this is such a pleasure to read, its so beautiful. 4/5 from me, take care...