by Casey Jun 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Have you been to the deepest parts of the ocean |
by uponfairywings
Omg brilliant! I love how you compared all these feelings to a treasure in the ocean. Beautiful comparisons! Wonderful poem! |
Wow your poem here was way sad, I almost cried, lol it reminded me of a friend I knew she wrote a poem about me, and we dated for a while, but it ended I was hurt but it was more of a joint ending, she was older then me and it just wasent working, now I cant even talk to her, and I miss her we were best friends, I miss her so much now! well sorry awsome poem. Cant wait to read more, sorry about your loss. *hugs* |