I only loved what you were

by gemowski   Jun 12, 2006


Here we are we meet again on the terms that we'll stay friends, but all we really do is pretend.

Here we are we hide behind one true love that you simply can't find, it's only you not me thats blind.

We had pure laughs we'll both not forget but when you left i was in a mess.
but i had to bush you off it was for the best.

now what we had will never be, this use to be down to you but now its down to me.
because the more of you that i see the more you rip and judge me.

I'm starting to realize what you are and you're not the man of my dreams by far.

you were on top of the world now day by day you're life get more blurred.

for you there is no word because i only love what you were....

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  • 18 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Nice job, you can add more imagery and try making the lines shorter

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Dowlly

    Few typos, but i really understood what you were saying, i'm kinda in that situation at the moment, so it really meant alot to me! thanx for sharing

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Good, flowed nicely

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Great job again! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

    -Stephanie-

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey mate great job! There were just a few gramatical errors, probably just typos! but just thought I'd make you aware! :D but yea I loved the title it caught my eye! well done hun. keep it up! xoxo Ruthie