by gemowski Jun 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Here we are we meet again on the terms that we'll stay friends, but all we really do is pretend. |
Nice job, you can add more imagery and try making the lines shorter |
by Sarah Dowlly
Few typos, but i really understood what you were saying, i'm kinda in that situation at the moment, so it really meant alot to me! thanx for sharing |
Good, flowed nicely |
by Stephanie
Great job again! 5/5 Keep up the good work! |
by Ruthie
Hey mate great job! There were just a few gramatical errors, probably just typos! but just thought I'd make you aware! :D but yea I loved the title it caught my eye! well done hun. keep it up! xoxo Ruthie |