As beautiful as a poem can be... this is it. This is indeed a heartstopping poem. You wrote it so well, and described the love of a parent so well. I'm just speechless. |
by dora
Hey this was a really t0uching p0em,. very heartfelt with meaning. intresting write. great j0b 0n it. keep it up xx |
by Deana
It is so sad when people use children as pawns in their battle. I can see that you love your son very much, He will know it too, You will be there for him, never stop trying to be with him more he will recognize that as a sign of your love for him. Good luck, my prayers are with you. |
by Darien
I'm lost for words. This poem really opened my eyes and my heart. A wonderful poem. The moment I started reading it, I couldn't stop. Your words were chosen well. You grasped the true feelings a father has for a son, and you did it so well. I am speechless. |
by Flaminia
Wow...a marvellous poem..A marvellous love letter to a son put down in verses....No more comments I can give...You left me without words... If I could I'd give you a 6!!! |