That was very good. I enjoyed reading it. Keep Writing. I'll give you a 5/5.

I love abstract-style poetry. I think it reads better and doesn't feel as forced as most rhyme-for-the-sake-of-rhyming poetry. This is a great example of that. :)

Awhhh.. I can relate very well with this poem. Seems like my life is one big black cloud is following me. Great Write.