Blood Red Lips

by Jessica   Jun 12, 2006


On this pitch black night
A shrieking cry is heard
The pale creature
Emerges from the shadows
And licks her vampire lips..

Eyes black like coal
Gleefully shining with
The urge to kill..
Painfully straight ebony hair
Falls over the colorless face
And sharp teeth protrude from
Those blood red lips..

The terrifying creature
Carefully chooses her prey
Then pounces upon them
Slowly sticking her jagged fangs
Into the neck
And licking the scarlet blood
That runs from the bite..

But as the sun slowly starts to rise
The immortal creature
Hisses with anger
As tiny clouds of smoke
Rise from her departed body..

She darts off into the horizon
To come back
When all is shadowy and quiet
To once again haunt the night..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    I love vampire poems and this one was simply beautiful! Wonderful write!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Wow, that was really amazing! i totally loved the vampire theme, it's very kool : D

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Good job! I like the metaphor here( wheter intentionally there or not). Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rain

    That was a perfect combination of a story and a poem. i like vampires, so i really liked your poem, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I love all of the description that you put into your poems. It makes them really nicee to read! keep on writing!