Comments : Lost and Unwanted

  • 18 years ago

    by sarahcide

    I like this poem so far. Maybe you should make your stanzas a bit longer and use more pattern? But, other than that, everything is great. I can't wait to read it when you're done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Wow love it. know the feeling. if u need a friend i am around