Flowers

by Melissa   Jun 12, 2006


Love always ends too soon
corrupting lies with truth
and I'm trying to dress words
in floral print and lace,
but dainty thorned roses
bleed heartache's fate

Poetic verses
lay pathetically unrhymed,
reddened,
and saturated
with the stench of flowers
exuding idiotic pain

Blossoms smell sweet in unison,
but pale all alone

And when tears are refused
we kill innocent beauty;
delicate petals shrivel
into a mess of forgotten hope,
root bounding our broken hearts
denying internal growth
and when we decide our soil
deserves proper nourishment,
I'm afraid
we've already concreted the pot

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lyn

    Brilliant poem very well expressed. Thank you.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lyn

    Oh what a beautiful write, you are so gifted at encapsulating truth and experience into lovely prose which speaks so much in such concise and moving language.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    It is very interesting. Atmosphere is great and you wrote this one excellently. Emotions are superbly described. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Writing pleasure from youand the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

    Nazeer

  • 18 years ago

    by Bexx

    WOW! DEEP LICK, I THINK GOOD CONTINUE WRITE