Congrats...I read Bob's critique.
I agree with him if this is one of your first attempts it was fantastic!
I myself find these hard to write and hope to one day soon attempt one!

Wonderful Haiku... Wonderfully written. And yes, Sunny is right (she always is). Glad you posted this one, it's a great piece.

Hey..bud..since when did -you- become friends with Sunny? lol Nice