I love your poem, it describes perfectly depression. I liked the way you described why you think that you don't belong in this world, and how people around you can hurt you. Your poem tells how hard it is to live just another day.

Good job! 5/5

Keep writing.

Wow o my this is an amazing poem. i love it.. its soo good. i can rele relate to it..its how i feel. it painted a picture in my mind.. great job 5/5
angie

Woderful. I love the flow of this one (hehe)
You expresss strong emotions well and the theme is something we can all identify with.
Great writing keep going
5/5