Great Poem, I enjoyed reading it- so thanx
When you have the chance, could you rate my poem “If I”
Appreciated- Truly Spoken

That was good, i give you a 4!! YAY!! lol ~*~Leena~*~

This poem is hell!
rochelle...xx

I think I've read this b-4...

Anyway! It's really really good, as are all of your poems, so keep it up, so I can keep having fun reading your work!!!!!

Rave!

I liked the repition...its rele nice

I spelled repetition wrong lol

Once again I thought this was great! You really spoke your mind and your feeling in this one! I t was really good! five again!
I thnk you owe me four now:)!lol

Sad but very good and thanks for the comment again and the advice i will try to capitalize all of my "i"s i may even go back and edit all of my poems but this poem was really good yet also very sad 5/5

I love reading your poems..you are a great great writer..I can always feel your emotions!!! it's definitely a 5/5

Wow that was very powerful....5/5

A very sad and touching poem Natalie again well done. You as usual give it a very touching feeling and congratulations on winning second place in the contest! Second is still a very good place.

Wow! I don't know what else to say! This piece was really awsome! The hate really poured through in an odd, beautiful sense.

Sitting alone in the bathtub,
Washing every inch of her skin.
Scraping away all the disgust,
Drowning in all her shame within.

Voices, Voices, Unknown voices,
Screeching and deafening her ears.

those lines stood out the most, something about them really attracted me to the piece. Wonderful job! I am jealous of your talent!

~DAna

Wow! I don't know what else to say! This piece was really awsome! The hate really poured through in an odd, beautiful sense.

Sitting alone in the bathtub,
Washing every inch of her skin.
Scraping away all the disgust,
Drowning in all her shame within.

Voices, Voices, Unknown voices,
Screeching and deafening her ears.

those lines stood out the most, something about them really attracted me to the piece. Wonderful job! I am jealous of your talent!

~DAna

Very nice, 5/5