She holds onto the wall for support.
She can't even stand, she's so weak.
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Those two lines were WOW. This was a really sad poem, And sorry for the loss. You expressed things pretty clearly in it, And I could feel the emotions. You did a really great job on it. Keep it up and smile. 5/5

`Taleee xx

Hey great poem, this would be a very hard topic to write a poem about the emotion and flow are amazing, and every line in the poem is soo strong. Im very sorry about what happened and tell your friend to hang in there

That poem was amazing. im sorry for your loss 5/5 on the poem keep up the good work

This is very sad. I only hope that your pain isn't that immense..
The description of the girl in this poem, even though I haven't really experienced something like this, this is what I would imagine it to be like. Heh, but I guess dreams can't always be compared to reality...
I especially liked the last stanza. Very nicely done!

Hope everything is well. Take Care,
Sarah-Joy

I love this poem its sooo sad but a brilliant poem i espically love the last line its clever and effective. amazing poem flows beautifuly and the emotin in it is very touching.
xxALLYxx

Good poem. The rhymes worked well into the story of the poem, and the emotion is very present in all of the stanzas.