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by Meggie33 Jun 12, 2006 category : Love, romance / lost love
You came over once, I thought you were hot. It should have been left at that, but it dragged on as I fought. I shouldn't have called you, you shouldn't know my name. We shouldn't be this far, it shouldn't be this way. I shouldn't know you family, we shouldn't talk every night. You shouldn't know about my life, and we shouldn't be close enought to fight. I shouldn't love you, you shouldn't know I exist. But it's not like that, because the simple reality we had to twist. Between your face, and the game you play, I managed to get hooked, and hooked, I shall stay. It weren't like this before, we weren't close enough for tears. But we went right ahead and chaged that, and now it's weird. You shouldn't be in my life, you should have left before you came. How did you slip in so fast? You shouldn't know my name.
by LadyPearl
Pretty good, you can still improve the flow.
by Alysha
I really like this poem. I can really relate to it. ~Alysha~