Omg this is great..you seem to hit all the plot points very accuratly. However, the Lord of the Flies and The Beast are the same thing. You see the Pigs Head on the stick was the proof of their savageness, for they were sacrificing the head to this "god" like creature. The Beast was simply this inner savage-ness. {fast fact:Lord of the Flies is Hebrew translated for God}Simon saw the "Beast" in the head who was telling Simon that he was to have fun, which was the childish thing to do.

The poem is great, and you analyze the book very well, as someone who hasn't read it would be very amazed, but since I have read it and done extensive analyzation I can find the trivial errors. -laughs-

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Wow. You just like described the entire story. Lol. I hated that book, it was horrible! I don't really know what to say about the poem though. It was good, it flowed well, and had good descriptions. Nicely done! 5/5