Comments : Looking Back

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Nice! I usually don't like poems with this particular rhyme scheme cause the rhyhming seems forced. However, that's not the case in this one.
    Also, the honesty and emotion you poured into this is astounding. Well done!
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • Wonderful, its not your best but its still very good on the third stanza the rhyming seemed a bit forced to me but other then that the ryhme and flow were both good!!! Very good work!! Thanks for entering my contest, sorry it took so long to comment!! 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by IfIhide11

    Terrific!!! It's was sweet, but sad. loved it!!!

    -ifihide11