by HOLLY ARMER
Nice! I usually don't like poems with this particular rhyme scheme cause the rhyhming seems forced. However, that's not the case in this one. |
Wonderful, its not your best but its still very good on the third stanza the rhyming seemed a bit forced to me but other then that the ryhme and flow were both good!!! Very good work!! Thanks for entering my contest, sorry it took so long to comment!! 5/5!! |
by IfIhide11
Terrific!!! It's was sweet, but sad. loved it!!! |