Black rose,dark soul

by *Raven Angel*   Jun 12, 2006


I am the black rose with the dark soul
my darkness i do not try to conceal
depression has taken the light from my
thoughts.

If you only knew how my life really is
you would understand why I hold this
knife in my hand don\'t try to stop me
my mind is made up i don\'t feel like living
i just GIVE UP!!!

i wanna bleed my pain out can u help?
or are u gonna sit back and watch
while i kill my self!!
you make excuses for your pain you hide in it
and your shame!! you cannot see the signs, i try
to tell you but you turn away

Fine don\'t listen, don\'t listen
turn your back one me we\'ll both go to
hell burning in engulfing flames!

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Amazing poem i love it. its so powerful i can relate so i kno how u feel.u wrote this so well. its amazing. i love ur poems. this one was very sad and deep but good. u hvae talent so keep on writing adn keep ur head up high
    take care adn stay strong
    angie

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Good poem-lot of emotion and you expressed it well

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Well done well done u did a great job as usual. and hey get on myspace and add me already its www.myspace.com/amyfearstears

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Wow.thats all i can say is wow. that was great! u hav some real talent.terrific job. the emotion and rhyme scheme was great. i can tel ur really upset in this poem.
    love ya lots,
    sore

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