Wow.thats all i can say is wow. that was great! u hav some real talent.terrific job. the emotion and rhyme scheme was great. i can tel ur really upset in this poem.
love ya lots,
sore

Well done well done u did a great job as usual. and hey get on myspace and add me already its www.myspace.com/amyfearstears

Good poem-lot of emotion and you expressed it well

Amazing poem i love it. its so powerful i can relate so i kno how u feel.u wrote this so well. its amazing. i love ur poems. this one was very sad and deep but good. u hvae talent so keep on writing adn keep ur head up high
take care adn stay strong
angie