by Poetess Lana Jun 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Death, the endless sleep, |
by Bridgette
Another great poem.. I loved the opening stanza and the way that you described death. It really captured my attention, and the rest of it was great as well.. The flow and rhythm was really good and held up well.. 5/5** |
by LadyPearl
Very nice descriptions, good job |
by Natalie
This was so good! I loved it. Especially the last couple of lines. Really great job, Keep it up =] 5/5 |
by RetroRavey
Odd, but good, |