No One

by X~Angie~X   Jun 12, 2006


No one can
see the pain
I hide inside
you always lied
to me
but now you see
that I will be
gone possibly
the pain it
flows like alot
of red rain
from the sky
I could die
from this huge scar
we've grown far
apart from each other
but no one can see
that I will never
be happy
life for me is crappy
so now everyone
can see that I'm
sad or upset
but I'm going to let
everyone think that.
But I do regret
so who am I?
I'm a nobody
no one sees that
so now no one
will have to
remember me

plz vote and comment I would like to hear wut u have to say.. thanx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tia Sherman

    This poem is crazy deep

  • 18 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    This poem is very well written. I can relate so much. You have a very unique style of writing. I like it a lot. Keep it up. Thnxs for the comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Fab, fab, fab...and i thought mine were good lmao
    ~sarah~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~mAybEsUmdAy~

    5/5 THESE POEMS ARE SO AWESOME

  • Loved it, 5/5 keep it up :)