Dark Light

by Avrii Monrielle   Jun 12, 2006


Dark Light
by Just Rain (aka HeartzOnIce)

A cold kiss of lust, passion and desire
I pull away in fear
Trembling as torments surround me
Your intense gaze fixated on me, eyes like fire

Clutching my knees, gazing out the window
Waking up from a dream brought me to this world of stone
Frozen images, black and white, as an old photo
Having woken from a dream spun centuries ago

A spinning wheel with thread, like that of a spider's web
Running down victim's bodies, tearing all apart
Photos put under a dark light
Showing a world from long ago

Here I sit, spinning
A cloth to hold the tales
Hiding in the closet's corners
Under the bride's own veil

The dark light that bidden I to play this role
Bindeth to my legs, to consume my soul
Thou innocence bequeathes the evils in my heart
Evils hidden deep inside from the dark light's mutated start

Holding a light over my head
Spin till death will I
Till I see my dearest sweetheart
Pass yonder window by

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hello chickie =]

    Wow, I'm sincerily (sp??) impressed with you, for someone of such a young age you have tremendous talent. And might I say (dont tell) that is the best comment I've gotten in AGES! lol long, loving and..yayness lmfao =]

    I love your style too! and your diction is steller. I wish I could write in rhyme! but that takes time... ahah okay not... ANYWAY lol poem information...lovin-ness:

    The dark light that bidden I to play this role
    Bindeth to my legs, to consume my soul
    Thou innocence bequeathes the evils in my heart
    Evils hidden deep inside from the dark light's mutated start

    0_o can I adopt you? =] the way you describe this with paradox's and old middle english..it's something I dont come across very often =], the flow, the rhyme, the stanzas.. sex-tactuar..(am I useing the same words over and over..I think I need a thesaurus)

    Either way keep up the greatness, and I'm honoured to be placed on your favorites hun ^__^ you are also on mine

    have a fantastic day
    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Wow!! this poem was sooo deep and imaginitive. I didn't really understand it, but i'm very tired right now so maybe thats why. But on the real this poem was excellent you are so good at describing, like "A spinning wheel with thread, like that of a spider's web". That showed real talent. Yea well I won't make this too long. 5/5 definitly, i would rate you higher if I could...bye:)

    Please comment on some of my poems, I would really appreciate it

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