Wow!! this poem was sooo deep and imaginitive. I didn't really understand it, but i'm very tired right now so maybe thats why. But on the real this poem was excellent you are so good at describing, like "A spinning wheel with thread, like that of a spider's web". That showed real talent. Yea well I won't make this too long. 5/5 definitly, i would rate you higher if I could...bye:)

Please comment on some of my poems, I would really appreciate it

Hello chickie =]

Wow, I'm sincerily (sp??) impressed with you, for someone of such a young age you have tremendous talent. And might I say (dont tell) that is the best comment I've gotten in AGES! lol long, loving and..yayness lmfao =]

I love your style too! and your diction is steller. I wish I could write in rhyme! but that takes time... ahah okay not... ANYWAY lol poem information...lovin-ness:

The dark light that bidden I to play this role
Bindeth to my legs, to consume my soul
Thou innocence bequeathes the evils in my heart
Evils hidden deep inside from the dark light's mutated start

0_o can I adopt you? =] the way you describe this with paradox's and old middle english..it's something I dont come across very often =], the flow, the rhyme, the stanzas.. sex-tactuar..(am I useing the same words over and over..I think I need a thesaurus)

Either way keep up the greatness, and I'm honoured to be placed on your favorites hun ^__^ you are also on mine

have a fantastic day
Jenn