Aww...this is so sad...but you gotta remember: They're both in a better place now, and trust me, he knows you feel guilty. You can't feel like that because it's not worth it. There's so much I wish I could've told a couple of kids in my grade who have passed on...but it's too late now. But what I can do is treat everyone that I meet in their own special way, so I know that if anything ever happens to me or them, I made them a part of my life.

Keep writing, this is great!

joy*:.xx

That is truly touching and really sad about what happened to these teens. I hope you'll feel better

Wow, this is a great poem, absulotly amazing!! ... did you write another poem about this accident because I swear I commented on it :S Well this was awesome the style was really good and it was put together well. Keep up the good work, and I;m very sorry about the loss

Confession is good for the soul. It makes good poetry, too. Some lessons in life are hard but hopefully we are still able to learn from them, too.

I loved how you added in all the relations of the lost one. It was very VERY creative how you looked at the accident and tryed to understand how every person who knew them. Nice work!! I really liked how you discribed crying in these lines

But they can't ignore the makeup stained cheeks,
Of those so close to the loved ones lost.