Comments : Thin Air

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I like this poem....it evokes feelings in me....comment my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Shut up and don't comment my poems.
    Lmao, I'm joking..

    Well, this poem was short, the description was there but the flow was weird, I think it's because this is not in traditional poem form.

    Oh well, I like it anyways.

    Good job.