Comments : People these days

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    I love the meanings hidden in this poem
    althou most of the readers here won't get your meanings or what you wanted to say, I love it and I probably can relate XD
    great job sweetie take care and keep it up =)
    sorry for my late comment, but thanks for your lovely ones ;)
    Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Nice....some errors in spelling and grammar if you care. And there's just something-even though it's enjoyable-about this piece that wasn't really too strong to me but it did have this razor honed edge towards the end. But still liked the points.
    ~Faith