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yer girl i liked it! thnx 4 leavin a comment on mine love yaz xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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This is absolutely brilliant. keep them coming i'm adding you to my favourites list!! thanks for commenting on mine. let me know what ones you like! thanks

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This one's probably my favourite out of all of your poems, very well thauhgt out and very meaningful, keep 'em coming :)

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Wow your very talented! i love your work =]]

Great poem...I wish I could start it all over again too...

Good poem

Definitely dark and defiinitely makes one open their eyes to the darker truth of reality...I'm sorry to hear about your pain believe me or not, it pains me to hear of such things...from anyone...'cause I do care...need anything just let me know...

This was really good :]
it sounded sortof paragraphy though.
but i liked it.

This was fantastic also ^_^ I completely understand this one also =p The spelling could use a little work but the flow was great and so were the emotions =) Remember though, that it's the hard things that we go through in life that shape us and make us strong =) 5/5
Rhea

This is a wonderful write that has enlightened the reader to the darker side of depression. These feelings that you feel are real but can be overcome with help if you desire it. Best wishes young lady. May you one day have the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart.

sadaddy

Great poem.
Very deep emotions.
Well done
You take care

Ps. Thanks for commenting one of my poems, I really appreciate it.

I also like this poem very much. There are many people out there who wish they could change their past but you cant. Your past is there for a reason. You cant just live by your past. You got to move and make yourself a better person out of it. Many people dont like to feel their emotions either but they are there for a reason that no one really knows so we just have to deal with them anyway that we can. Sorry that you have to deal with these things.

I also like this poem very much. There are many people out there who wish they could change their past but you cant. Your past is there for a reason. You cant just live by your past. You got to move and make yourself a better person out of it. Many people dont like to feel their emotions either but they are there for a reason that no one really knows so we just have to deal with them anyway that we can. Sorry that you have to deal with these things.

Hello, i feel the emotion in the poem. very good. i would try to make it flow a little easier.

Hello, i feel the emotion in the poem. very good. i would try to make it flow a little easier.

Hey this one was like totally wow

Awsum .. really nyc ...

Wow.
that was really good.
you are good at writing.
i loved this poem.
write a lot more maybe you could become famous for them.
even if they are because of your life expieriences.
no matter what,
you are awsome at this.