Shot to the Head

Memories come to mind
always being left behind
no one around to hear me cry
all i wanted was to die
now my thoughts are coming true
i know now what i have to do
look around the room
death is coming with a boom
one shot to the head
and I'll soon be dead
with no one around to hear
my death is drawing near
I'm writing this note for all to know
the reason why i had to go
the pain is too much to take
and all my life I've been a fake
but now it's time to bid farewell
as i send my soul straight to hell

i know most you won't, but if you will, please comment, it really bothers me not knowin' what people think about my writing.