by simply crissyboo Jun 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Life is short, |
by Batman
OMG....thats so...short..but seriously touching...Holy Cow..imma read it again...H/O...ok back it gives me goose bumps...yeah..your def. good. |
by scott
I like this poem, but just remember that its better to have someone remember you, then no one even knowing you |
I really like this. I wrote a poem similar to this once...but I was a lot younger, and it didn't turn out very well. Yours is very well written. |
Wow...*grins* thanks guys. that was actually the first poem i ever wrote, I'm glad you liked it! |
by Sean Allen
I like the rhyming, and thought the rhythm was okay. I disagree with what you're saying though... people remember others for all sorts of reasons.. I mean I remember my dead DOG at completely random times, and that definitely isn't just once per year. |