Killing fables

by silhouette fairy   Jun 13, 2006


Jack and Jill
a pale of water
up the hill
Jill was cute
but Jack thought Mary was hotter
Jack fell down
broke his crown
just before he fell
Jill stabbed him
teach you to look at Mary,
think twice next time.
Jill cries after him
then silently walks away

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Woah. that was kinda scary! i never wooda guessed shes a murderer. lol wow nice twist on a classic. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Very unique I must say. Thanks for entering my contest

  • 18 years ago

    by an endless sky

    LOL