This was a really good poem. I liked it a lot and it had a good ending. 5/5

Kool...kool
no rhymes, and i dont think it really needed any-the words stood tall by themselves.

keep it up

october xx

I want the same thing too. people r so demanding. a really good read. keep it up.
love willow xxoo

Simple and 2 the point another success as a poet.