Goodbye

by Melissa S. Masucci   Jun 13, 2006


Suddenly I find myself alone,
And now where I once felt at home
is somewhere I am no longer welcome.

Your eyes are not warm anymore,
your embrace doesn't offer the protection it once did.
And the tone of your voice, a warning
that things would never be the same.

People ask why it lasted this long,
why we didn't stop sooner our relationship gone wrong.
But if you never stop loving,
How can you just throw that away?

To fight for your attention with the wintery winds,
the skis, the ice and snow...
I won't go there anymore, I won't fight that war.
There's more to life than that for me.

And yes, I still love your smile,
but you never smile at me anymore.
The only thing I see anymore are your eyes,
cold and fleeting.

To save my sanity and what I treasure,
I made a decision to protect my future.
The rest of my journey I will face alone.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Good job hunn. I like it. No rocky parts and the flow was excellent.

    Hey. YOu read my poem called "Childish Little Games." didnt you? Well if you did, was I being childish in it? Just wondering because someone said I was being really childish myself. Please be honest. Just leave a comment on that poem. Don't pm me.

  • 18 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I loved it. Amazing flow of words and rhythm to the whole poem. I liked how you described certain things in this, how you expressed some of your experiences. Greatly put together!

    Thanks for the comment. It was well appreciated, and you were only the few who didn't ridicule it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    I really like this poem... Very true in parts for me, i can definitely relate...

    To save my sanity and what I treasure,
    I made a decision to protect my future.
    The rest of my journey I will face alone.
    [I loved these lines]

    keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    It was very descriptive.
    and emotional.
    not my favourite thing to reaad.
    but still good.
    ~Emah
    4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    It's never easy to leave when feelings are still so very real. I'm sorry to read about your story, but it's great that you made the right decision. The poem was so heartfelt... Good write. 5/5

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