Sorry things turned out the way they did but the love of poetry is something that we all can share and I don't feel alone on that. :)

"why we didn't stop sooner our relationship gone wrong."
this seems like two phrases, orobably more appropriately separated by a comma.
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"I won't do there anymore, I won't fight that war."
go there? do that? do there doesn't sound right to me.
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I liked the three-line stanzas that led the reader in and dropped them off at the end. My favorite stanza was the second to last, something about still loving parts of them, but those parts not existing for you... it seemed very realistic and honest.

But if you never stop loving,
How can you just throw that away?
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I loved those lines. You did a great job on this poem Melissa. I loved it from start to finish. And you made a great ending to the poem aswell. Awesome job. Keep it up! =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I have read 3 of your poems..and I feel like we are friends. I mean we have so much in common. I just love your work! I am going to add you to my Favorites. This poem just blew me away. You hold on to someone for so long because you are hoping that they will change back into the person you fell in love with. But in reality, they grow miserable and boring. Keep writing girl, you've got talent!

I read this and it seemed so real.none of my poems rhyme either,so no worries.wonderful job!!
--lexie

It's never easy to leave when feelings are still so very real. I'm sorry to read about your story, but it's great that you made the right decision. The poem was so heartfelt... Good write. 5/5

It was very descriptive.
and emotional.
not my favourite thing to reaad.
but still good.
~Emah
4/5

I really like this poem... Very true in parts for me, i can definitely relate...

To save my sanity and what I treasure,
I made a decision to protect my future.
The rest of my journey I will face alone.
[I loved these lines]

keep it up!

I loved it. Amazing flow of words and rhythm to the whole poem. I liked how you described certain things in this, how you expressed some of your experiences. Greatly put together!

Thanks for the comment. It was well appreciated, and you were only the few who didn't ridicule it.

Good job hunn. I like it. No rocky parts and the flow was excellent.

Hey. YOu read my poem called "Childish Little Games." didnt you? Well if you did, was I being childish in it? Just wondering because someone said I was being really childish myself. Please be honest. Just leave a comment on that poem. Don't pm me.