You Lied

by *Daniel94*   Jun 13, 2006


Only I know the life that you lead
only I know that you lied,
everyday you wish that you were dead
the scars on your wrist show you've tried.

So many people would kill for your life
your friends, your family, your wife,
you smoke, you lie and drink all the time
Then you act like every thing's fine.

But one day your conscience won't hold
you'll go out into the public and crack,
you'll know the lies that you've already told
are so cheap and so full of crap.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    Even tho it aint finish its pretty kewl.
    i likes it. its been a long time no message or comment.
    I got lots of new poems lol
    check em out if ya wanna and tell me wat ya think.
    well g2g bye!

  • 18 years ago

    by aja

    Very well written, i love the ending.. check out my other poems, they are much better, that was a random poetry contest where u have to make up one in 30 seconds. anyway, i also love the A Girl Is... poem, one day a girl will embrace that in you, lovely day, aja

  • 18 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    Wow nd ppl say im a good writer lol ur alot better!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Maree

    Great poem - again. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I love your poems . Really good.

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