Good poem but some words are needed |
by Ren
Really good! So full of heart! Great job! 5/5 all the way. Thanks for the comments. |
by Rachael
Wow this poem is really good. i like how oyu conpare that the person wishes he was dead, even though so many people would live his life in a snap. keep writing :] |
by Lithium
Intresting poem here, u do speak ur mind thats a good thing to see nice work xox sam |
Thats a pretty kewl poem! |
by Bridgette
I really like this.. i hope that you finish it soon! Great job! I added you to my favs. You're talented! Keep it up! |
by Tiffany
Wow, i love this poem ur really good at writing them, i love this one |
by Tiffany
Wow, i love this poem ur really good at writing them, i love this one |
by Tiffany
Wow, i love this poem ur really good at writing them, i love this one |
I like ur writing..its very deep...keep writing like this...nice job 5/5 |
by Natalie
I love your poems . Really good. |
by Maree
Great poem - again. Keep it up. |
by Mackenzie
Wow nd ppl say im a good writer lol ur alot better!!!! |
by aja
Very well written, i love the ending.. check out my other poems, they are much better, that was a random poetry contest where u have to make up one in 30 seconds. anyway, i also love the A Girl Is... poem, one day a girl will embrace that in you, lovely day, aja |
Even tho it aint finish its pretty kewl. |