Hmmm, I read it several times and I'm not very sure If I've gotten the full meaning out of it or not but I did get the wonderful word usage you used through out this poem! Excellent! The sllyable count was off in a few sentances. Have a friend read your poem out loud and mark each line that she seems to speed up or stumble over words or slur them, then you'll know where to change the lines to make it perfect! Overall nice job and a well deserved 5/5

Well done, i love this poem, i relly love the words you used, your brill at writing 5/5
take care
sarah xx

Intense and moving with a solid rhyme scheme

Good Work

Sondos

I love it ^_^ Absolutely amazing :)

I love it ^_^ Absolutely amazing :)

I love it ^_^ Absolutely amazing :)

Another poem that hit me hard. Teh heh. It was excelent. I sound like a drone (LOL) but all of your peoms ROCK!!!!!

just so you know I'm putting you on my faves, ands ur getting a 5/5 on this one.

Rave

I gave this a five I thought it was totally awesome and so very true I have never been truley suicidal but I just know the feeling up and down this flow is great, the ending is great and I really think that you spoke your mind in this one!

Hrmm... was this for MY contest? I thought i read it before!!! lol anyways. great poem, I love the rhyme scheme, and you have a great intuiton for poetry!!!!

5/5

Allanah

:O The pure emotion alone si enough to make me love this poem. you are probobly my favorite poet right now. your wrting is amazing. you have a little bit of everyithng. and you know how to write it all!! thank you for being a great inspiration! i noly wish i could write as good as you. thanks again.

p.s- this poem is so good!

Again...wow...i can relate...this is excellent...you can sense her pain and you just want to reach through the computer to help this girl...before it's too late...um...yeah...i can be a little weird sometimes...(*smiles peevishly*)...anyways...i loved it...5/5.

Blah...my computer won't let me vote again...=(

*Claps* Bravo!! I loved it. Omg your poems are amazing great job. Seriously. Keep up the wonderful work.

Beautiful flow and great description. you are a fantastic writer, well done on this xxALLYxx