Very good. Again the imagry was great. I could picture snow falling from the sky and everything. But oh god do I hate winter, I am so cold lol Anywho, Back to the poem lol I did like it quite abit. It was different. And really well done. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

"To absorb natures beauty,"
nature's
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"and I am content, to watch, this white snow fall "
The commas aren't really necessary.
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I liked it. I'll say that in most symbolic references, snow either symbolises a blanket of innocence or a harsh reality, and I'm glad the poem focused on the latter. The rhyming was well done in this poem and was very unobtrusive.

Wow amazing again. u have a way with words thats spectacular. 5/5 btw sry i will b goin so far down in the list but i cant r/r/c love or friendship poems.

This was different it tells a very different story, it really makes your picture what's happening you've used lots of imagery... well done
- Polly

Awh, I loved this one. Specially talking about snow and writing. Just made me want snow even more, and to be sitting on my bed with Hot Chocolate and a good book.. Mmm..Well written. :]]]