Time to move on

by johnnys_princess   Jun 13, 2006


I loved you once but not anymore
the pain you caused still makes me sore
i have a new life now so please move on
the love we once had is all but gone
yes there were good times but out numbered with the bad
theres no time to dwell or even to be sad
it wasn't going to work you had to many problems in your life
i tried to help,you wanted a drinking buddy and not a wife
you cant turn back the clock the damage is done
just be grateful we have our son
i dont wish you no harm just to please leave us in the past
don't make the same mistake by rushing in too fast

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Another great poem! this was filled with emotion and as usual the rhymes and the flow worked well!

    i tried to help you wanted a drinking buddy and not a wife
    ^ add in a "but" before "you"

    nice work! another 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    DANG gurly! sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love reading love poems, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    I liekd this one but I think it could do with some work. some of the lines didn't fit in with the rhythm. Overall I thought it was pretty good.

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    It was Grrrrreat! It needs an ending though you kind of left me hanging. It needs like a final good bye, but the rest is great

  • 18 years ago

    by Maribel

    I really liked this one! nicely done!

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