Comments : Time to move on

  • 18 years ago

    by Erin

    Damn that poem was really good. keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Maribel

    I really liked this one! nicely done!

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    It was Grrrrreat! It needs an ending though you kind of left me hanging. It needs like a final good bye, but the rest is great

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ*KiM*ღ

    I liekd this one but I think it could do with some work. some of the lines didn't fit in with the rhythm. Overall I thought it was pretty good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    DANG gurly! sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love reading love poems, great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Another great poem! this was filled with emotion and as usual the rhymes and the flow worked well!

    i tried to help you wanted a drinking buddy and not a wife
    ^ add in a "but" before "you"

    nice work! another 5/5!