by Erin
Damn that poem was really good. keep it up |
by Maribel
I really liked this one! nicely done! |
by AnnMarie
It was Grrrrreat! It needs an ending though you kind of left me hanging. It needs like a final good bye, but the rest is great |
by ღ*KiM*ღ
I liekd this one but I think it could do with some work. some of the lines didn't fit in with the rhythm. Overall I thought it was pretty good. |
by Bloomed Rose
DANG gurly! sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love reading love poems, great job! |
by Jessica
Another great poem! this was filled with emotion and as usual the rhymes and the flow worked well! |