A special person like you

by johnnys_princess   Jun 13, 2006


I know your not his real dad but hey what does that matter
your the one who fills his life with so much laughter.
your doing a great job at raising him and being dad
the patience you have with him and your never mad
your always there to play with him and mess around
to hear you both laughing is the sweetest sound
so thank you for making us so very happy,our lives are wonderful now
1year ago i wouldn't have believed this is where i'd be i'd ask you how?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. this has had a lot of visits.. lol.. great job! it was very sweet.. i loved it.. the emotion was clear as were your descriptions!

    the patience you have with him and your never mad
    ^ maybe try rearanging this a bit.. it sounds a bit off.. for example :
    "your patient with him and never get mad"

    nice write.. very enjoyeable! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    This one was okay! I can't say it was my favorite. It definatley could have went on longer. More details more more more

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Sounds like a great guy.

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