I really like string-of-thought poetry versus poetry that rhymes for the sake of rhyming. Rhyming poetry always comes across as forced. I really love this piece.

Uhm... it [IS] rhyming... but not forced. nice poem. ^_^

"You're the dream I've always been wishing of."

I love that line. It just sounds so beautiful.
The poem was great. Good concept. Keep it up
5/5
*Gem*