Should be enough

by leeann   Jun 13, 2006


I can olny do so much
sticking my heart out there should be enough.
i guess we will see.
cause when you say these things to me,
you make me wish that one day it could be.
not being sure
if your words really are that pure.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kerry

    I gave you a 5/5 becuase the rythem it complements the ryhems. Its short (I wish it was a bit longer but oh well) and you can feel the doubt in the last two stanza.
    not being sure if your words
    really are that pure *becuase
    This has happend before*

    Thats my edit but I dont know if you want to put that in there. keep on writing. Please comment on my poems if you get time.

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