Comments : Should be enough

  • 18 years ago

    by Kerry

    I gave you a 5/5 becuase the rythem it complements the ryhems. Its short (I wish it was a bit longer but oh well) and you can feel the doubt in the last two stanza.
    not being sure if your words
    really are that pure *becuase
    This has happend before*

    Thats my edit but I dont know if you want to put that in there. keep on writing. Please comment on my poems if you get time.