Just as you are

by johnnys_princess   Jun 13, 2006


Your serene and calm as the ocean tide,
you seem to flow you seem to glide
your inner tranquility can never be denied,
the peace you give otherts will never subside
your manner is always easy going, your heart is always light,
others marvel in your company, you are always a delight.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good.. i loved the rhymes and the descriptions! the flow worked well and the imagery was beautiful.. great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Again I thougt this one was good. I think your pucntuation and all is pretty off there is not a period in the entire poem. Please return the favor and read and rate mine!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    AWW.. That would be so cute on a card.. Thanks for the comment hun.
    muwahXXXXXXX