by johnnys_princess Jun 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
Your serene and calm as the ocean tide, |
by Jessica
This was good.. i loved the rhymes and the descriptions! the flow worked well and the imagery was beautiful.. great job! 5/5 |
by AnnMarie
Again I thougt this one was good. I think your pucntuation and all is pretty off there is not a period in the entire poem. Please return the favor and read and rate mine! |
by Kelsey
AWW.. That would be so cute on a card.. Thanks for the comment hun. |