AWW.. That would be so cute on a card.. Thanks for the comment hun.
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Again I thougt this one was good. I think your pucntuation and all is pretty off there is not a period in the entire poem. Please return the favor and read and rate mine!

This was good.. i loved the rhymes and the descriptions! the flow worked well and the imagery was beautiful.. great job! 5/5