Comments : Urges

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Loved this poem-

    "I remember being happy,
    Hurting myself and being happy feels the same.

    I must sound crazy,
    To those who dont know what it feels like.
    Those sane people,
    Who dont cry themselves to sleep a night.

    Im sick of feeling pain,
    I want to have control.
    Please, this urge must leave,
    RELIEVE MY SOUL"

    These lines are mi favorite part and are really deep-u got talent 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Incredible. Speechless! Great and sad and emotional... everything needed is already in place. Don't quit ur day job honey!
    5/5!